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Reply #5 - Nov 8th, 2005 at 10:33pm
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Richie --- all three were good reads --- I am partial to the third --- love a love poem ~smile~

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Reply #4 - Oct 31st, 2005 at 1:46pm
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Exercise [its not hard] 
Triolets are not so hard

Its not so hard writing a Triolet
If you just practice with the rhyme,
Its difficult to get your flow and yet
Its not so hard writing a Triolet
The pattern will come in time, don’t fret,
Just find your flow from line to line
Its not so hard writing a Triolet
If you just practice with the rhyme 

Richard Taylor
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10-10-05 


OH SUSANNE

Susanne Sedgwick was such a beauty 
With her hazel eyes and auburn hair, 
we all fell for Suzanne, it was a duty, 
Susanne Sedgwick was such a beauty 
The lads thought there none as fruity 
As Susanne never was there one so fair 
Susanne Sedgwick was such a beauty 
With her hazel eyes and auburn hair. 

richard taylor 
7-5-02


Goodbye my bonny lass
Triolet 

So goodbye to you my bonny lass 
Be kind when you think of me, 
The days we shared now gone alas 
So goodbye to you my bonny lass, 
Our love like shadows as they pass 
Just dreams never meant to be. 
So goodbye to you my bonny lass 
Be kind when you think of me. 

Richard Taylor
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When life is done
Triolet 

When life is done and my story told
May I rest beside thee ever more,
My heart was always yours to hold
When life is done and my story told.
Lonely nights always thy light would fold
Around me showing Heavens distant shore
When life is done and my story told
May I rest beside thee ever more. 

Richard Taylor
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Triolet for Violet
Reply #3 - Jul 24th, 2004 at 3:46pm
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Yehaw!!  I love this!  I just began delving into triolets very recently and used Conrad Geller's triolet as a lead in to my versification forum on Smothered Air where I am a moderator!   I guess I should have asked for permission but I did provide a link to it.  Drats!  Do I need to do that when it's in the public view and I've given full credit?  Let me know cause I don't want to be rude!  eeek!  

okay, enough blather.  Here is the first Triolet I wrote in honour of an internet friend's daughter.  

Triolet for Violet

Sweet Violet, with no shades of shy.
She sparkles in frilly dresses.
Spicy hearts, deep dish cherry pie.
Sweet Violet, with no shades of shy.
Candy apple of her mother’s eye.
Curlicues of golden tresses.
Sweet Violet, with no shades of shy.
She sparkles in frilly dresses.

04/07/04
Penelope Allen
For Gracie Lou and her daughter Violet who's favourite colour is red.
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Reply #2 - Feb 19th, 2004 at 4:23am
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Triolet - Can my pen match?

Can my pen match what my heart learns?
Can these eight lines express desire?
This poet writes what my soul yearns.
Can my pen match what my heart learns?
As passion in me deeply burns,
Fueled by your love's eternal fire,
Can my pen match what my heart yearns?
Can these eight lines express desire?

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Reply #1 - Sep 12th, 2003 at 4:37am
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I like the very thoughtful one you appropriately posted on this day of memorial, Norm.  Thank you.

Here's one for fun (I hope):

Exculpatory Thoughts

Exculpatory !  Thoughts may trouble thee;
so never fear; look up!  The Word is there.
Thy diction nary stumbles on; there'll be
exculpatory thoughts -- may trouble thee.

Thy dictionary stumbles on . . .   “I'll be!”
(Can’t charge me now with ignorance!  Who’d dare?)

Exculpatory thoughts may trouble thee,
so never fear look up; the word is there.

© Daniel J Ricketts 11 July 2003
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Triolet ~ F.O.M.  January/February 2008
Sep 12th, 2003 at 2:48am
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How about we start off 2008 by trying a triolet, folks? - Daniel

So, what is a Triolet ... simple: 

About five hundred years ago when lyric poetry was the rage, poetic forms tended to become more and more tests of raw skill. A poet had to be disciplined. There were the riddles, puns, and acrostics and all were inside verse. Most forms have died ("Thank God", you would probably say). We moved from structure, technique and strict form to imagery, metaphor, free verse and all that other good "stuff". 

Going back at least to the thirteenth century, triolets were short, usually witty poems, just perfect for tucking into a box of candy or some flowers. Its name comes from the use of the key line three times (French "tri"). A similar form, the rondeau, means "round poem" and also refers to the key feature of repetition (we all know, "Row, row, row your boat", which is still referred to as a "round"). 

The triolet has eight lines.  The first line is used three times and the second line is repeated once. So the requirement for rhyme words is easy, and the eight lines really comes down to only five different ones

It's best to begin a triolet with a statement or observation. 

Note from Daniel:

The usual rhyme scheme in a triolet is:

A    
B
a   -  Rhymes with A
A   -  Whole line identical with A    
a   -  Rhymes with A
b   -  Rhymes with B 
A   -  Whole line identical with A    
B   -  Whole line identical with B    


Now here are three examples before you try it:: 

from Norm:

Twin Tower Triolet

Try, oh let those souls know peace
Grant us the will and more, the power
We’ll focus in through tears that blur
Try, Oh let those souls know peace
They are gone, but their spirits stir 
The pain is ours not just the towers
Try, Oh let those souls know peace
Grant us the will and more, the power


from Conrad Geller (printed with permission): 

You have to write a triolet 
If you would make your name immortal. 
To get a form that's fit and set. 
You have to write a triolet. 
From free verse all you ever get 
Is just another yawn or chortle. 
You have to write a triolet 
If you would make your name immortal.



from "Unknown": 

I loved you, and will love again 
If all the circumstance is right. 
I am the faithfullest of men. 
I loved you, and will love again. 
Just re-create, by word or pen, 
That lake, those trees, that starry night 
I loved you. I will love again 
If all the circumstance is right. 


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N O W    I T ' S    Y O U R    T U R N ! ! !

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